Love grew in windblown waves,
taller than the giants of story,
where we could hear
the laughter of ages past.
Author notes
Painting by Shirley Reade
A contest entry
- 'Morning ride' by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended December 28, 2007, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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ooohhh....
now this is too adorable...
I love this write...you took the inspiration pic and elevated the game indeed...
wonderful take on the image and so moving too!
your heart bleeds into your poetry...so sweetly...
well done!
congrats on the bronze!
Blessings! Tammy

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Beautifully said...the imagery is very sweet and a wonderful story in few words...I remember this days well...
Congrat's on the Bronze!
Love,
mystic
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Congrats on the bronze. I love your take on this picture. Love that continues to grows ...but is remembered from timeless memories of the past. Beautifully penned my dear poet.


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So immensely creative and attention grabbing... Thanks ever so much for sharing this... x Love and light, Lavender Butterfly.
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Awe this is a beautiful take on that picture.




The opening line is like wow...
Best of luck in the contest.

Delila

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Beautiful
~This just flows so well and I love the simple meaning of your pen with this one...A blessings as always hun...
Best of Luck
Blessings

~~Cheryl~~

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