His throne sits in the heavens
a mighty footstool is the Earth.
Saturated with wisdoms heart
listening to any that may call.
Waiting to be loved forever
with the respect he so deserves.
Creator of all the universe...
Author notes
picture prompt...
In a list
A contest entry
- - A Simple Touch - by Desire.
700 points, ended December 31, 2007, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - - Go for the Gold V - (Pre-Writes...That's Right) by Desire.
700 points, ended May 8, 2008, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Welcome!!
Beautiful
Your piece qualifies and elated to see You back
Wanted to toss Your way for a second look:
thrown-throne
Best wishes in my contest Sweet Soul!!
and much love~ Desire~*~
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I like the images this write produced in my mind! Awesome job with this poem. It does what good poetry is meant to do, create an emotion or image from the reader. Well done! Good luck in the contest.
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I am not one for the religous writes but I did enjoy this one.
Best of Luck,
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Excellent
Wow, such a vivid and creator write. Congratulations on your honorable mention.
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Very good. With simplicity.
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Thank you muches
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Master Creator
Wonderful piece You have penned with images that takes the reader there to experience
Beautiful border to compliment...
Magnificent take on the prompt~~
These lines pulled also tugged hard:
Saturated with wisdoms heart
listening to any that may call.
Love the mighty footstool reference...
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
**Judging will be done shortly~~
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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I love the first verse, earth as a footstool, said well, thought provoking, good work
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wow this is an amazing take on the picture and creares so many images in my mind well done hun and best of luck
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I like this.it fits the prompt and it is lovely.
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