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You could call it...

With such and incredible poem
it simply could not go unnamed
this truly; would be insane

  "Agoraphobia"-
now that's an idea
wouldn't you agree
readers would genuinely
be intrigued

passing by thousands of poems
just waiting for one to spark
even a little hint of curiosity

Agoraphobia?
what a unique hook
I think I'll stop
and take a look.

Another perfectly acceptable route
"Bars of Psyche"
an eye catcher- no doubt

Humans are naturally curious beings
on the mental state of other things
interested in the souls of other creatures
studying their minds or merely their features

with bars of Psyche to make them think
they would simply just have to click the link

"Playing War with Solitaire"
would make a reader
want you to take them there

Two card games battling it out
just imagine playing war
with no-one else
behind your locked door

"Contradicting Claustrophobia"
that would inevitable pull anyone in
unless they were xenophobia

But you don't have to be ashamed
about different things in poetry
because all readers are looking
for something foreign to cliche

So there you have it my friend
I hope something here
does justice to not only your creative side

but most importantly the ink of your pen......

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  • Sedated Affection
    January 27, 2008

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    I like this it was cute and you're right if I saw those titles on a poem I would most likely read it. Good Job momma-to-be!


  • parntsoftwins
    December 28, 2007

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    Please don't comment back I like to be fair also don't rate but I must say the fact that you not only gave me title ideas but wrote it in an amazing art of poetry is beautiful! Thank you for such a unique and well crafted entry!!~Nikki