My head is swimming
And my heart is racing
There is a fine line
Between love and hate
And I'm teatering on the brink
All over you
I don't want to push you away
But I'm running out of options
To clear my heart of you
Is my only way to move on
But I still want to be friends
Yet all I get is head games
So I'm questing through my soul
Never to establish
What is my role
Please tell me what you think
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It's been a longgg ass time since I commented on your work, so I'm going to do so now :] This piece was absolutely captivating & incredible. Every word holds so much meaning and this poem is so amazingly deep.
"There is a fine line
Between love and hate"
Ah<3 Loved those. The perfect lines that hold so much truth. Excellent write
<3
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this is pretty good. I like it. aah! i'm the SECOND COMMENT! lol. there is a fine line between love and hate... and a lot of the time, we all just kind of linger around that one little line... I really do like this. Keep up your amazing work!
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"There is a fine line
Between love and hate
And I'm teatering on the brink
All over you"
Well, I like this stanza of your rambling.
The title fits the content,because in reading it I
can identify with the confusion.
You did a good job.
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