December day swallows darkness,
licking one bit of light from
the corner of its mouth.
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A contest entry
- One Amazing Stanza by Cherokee.
450 points, ended December 31, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Excellent
Very well done. A great poem for the subject. Best of luck in the contest.
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I love the idea of the day licking its mouth! Great image.
Bill
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And winter settles in like she belongs(lol)This was so beautifully written to be so short...
Best of Luck in the Contest hun...
Blessings
~~Cheryl~~
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Thank you
I appreciate your comments. This one passed spellcheck, but I need reminders to use it.
wolfie -
I like this metaphor of winter and darkness. It does describe winter well.
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nice but use spell check.
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