“Grandma, look, the corn is high!
It reaches all the way up to the sky!”
These…are the special moments.
A contest entry
- 'Morning ride' by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended December 28, 2007, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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awwww, this is sooo cute, and you are right these are the speacial momments, very cherishable =) lol
wonderful write, and again good job with the hm =)
stephanie
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Smaller work here but it says it all so so well
You deserved to win the trophy.
Special moments...
Cindy
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wow!
I love this poem and the picture fits the descriptions perfectly! so much beautiful imagery expressed in very few words. These definitely are the special moments.
congrats on the HM!
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This is simply beautiful and truly poetic in few words... Thanks ever so much for sharing this... x Love and light, Lavender Butterfly.
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ohhh... this almost made me cry
It reminds me of my grandmother when I was little. I grew up in a rural area, and my grandparents and great-grandparents grew corn, among other vegetables. Then, my grandmother was strong and healthy, a far cry from the frail woman I know now.
Thanks for the walk down memory lane.
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Perfect
The picture and the three perfect lines...takes my breath away! Best regards, buddy.
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My heart...
is smiling. My mother lived on a farm...and had corn fields all around her house...this made me think of her and my son... Thank you for your spirit... xoxo
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wonderfully said my friend
this was just beautiful, thanks for sharing and best wishes to you in this contest.
Tory
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