Kiss of Heaven
Taste of spring,
Look what beauty
Grandma brings.
Gods beautiful eyes
Hands reaching to the skies,
Life…
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Love you baby
A contest entry
- 'Morning ride' by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended December 28, 2007, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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How beautifully poetic and sincerely enchanting... Thanks ever so much for sharing this... x Love and light, Lavender Butterfly.
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Awe... This is precious...
Great entry for the contest.
Best of luck to you
Love,
Messy
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*LOOKING at YOU*
This is pure beauty, motion and love. With this short verse you made me see pure love. Bravo!
Love,
Amera♥
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A wonderful life that grandmas bring to us as we grow and fantastic memories now. Very well done dear sis.
Best to you in the contest.
Mouser
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What a beautifully refreshing poem baby, I miss my grandma.
Mine were all wonderful people. Love you baby...scott 
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This is beautiful. The words are so lovely and heartfelt. I am so glad I read this tonight. Brought a warm feeling of my loved ones in Heaven. Take care. Blessings to you. Sandy
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This is a beautiful little piece. I especially like the part about "Look what beauty Grandma brings"
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Aww, this is beautiful!
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thanks so much for your kind words. I appreciate you reading me.
Tory
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this is a beautiful write mom. it holds deep beauty within your words and i can just close my eyes to image the scene. well done and best of luck
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