Timelessness is the rhythm of life
battling a constant race of time
chromatic waves pass by slowly
a ghost of a woven fierce past.
Radiating a numbing sameness
encased in a womb of time
little pieces of a deterent past
as seconds melt into a smooth blend.
Ravaging menaces beface mankind
consistent transport to and from
mere remnants of a humans life
aloft the currents raging free.
A timeless spirit, the inner pulse
on the very brink of changing times
new discoveries awaiting, a new era
life being an endless cycle.
A contest entry
- Artists - Poets & Paint by poetryality.
3250 points, ended December 30, 2007, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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You take us on a word journey through the works of Alex Grey with these poetic verses. They are well written, and placed with delicate measure. A smooth flow is throughout this finely penned work. Excellent! Thank you for this entry in my contest!
Much Love ♥
Renee
HERE'S WISHING YOU AND YOURS THE HAPPIEST NEW YEAR
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I really liked the beat in this, and if you're a perfectionist you have a spelling error in the second line. But if you're not one, it doesn't matter. It has a lot of good imagery, and I read it twice to make sure I got the meaning. You know how to make your point, it doesn't leave much to argue.
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thank you for your content. I do try to catch my mistakes, a perfectionist I wish. I'm so glad you enjoyed my write.
Rose
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