Alone,lifted,fulfilled but still distorted
joyous with gratitude yet disheartend, contorted,
naked except for a vial of sweat..................
Author notes
got the next line yet ?
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- One Amazing Stanza by Cherokee.
450 points, ended December 31, 2007, 14 entries
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Comments
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really must remember which finger goes on the A.
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no I don't... no, no, not yet... lol
I made it sound like Dr. Seuss, didn't I?
viel?
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