My mind,
It's like a shattered mirror.
Sharp,
Dazzling,
Dangerous
But fundamentally broken.
Each piece is shattering further
With each realiseation
Of my insignifigance
To you.
Do you see me?
So lonley behind a gaurd of
Icy,
Fiery anger
Fueled
By fear!
All I want is not to be alone.
All I am scared of
Is being close to you.
The more I care
The more I get hurt.
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- My Own Self Destruction by CherryOnTop.
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i love how you took the prompt and showed by telling us its in the mind
great interp -
OH so true... we always get hurt more by the ones we care about... and yes, that can cause resentment. Indeed a lonley situation. Thanks so much for entering my contest.
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*realization.
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Good job and good luck in the contest my dear.
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Nice write. Fear is the greatest enemy for the self destruction. Faith in God is the only remedy.
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Good luck and thanks for entering my contest.
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