We meet in secret
barely say a word.
Our need is overwhelming.
Only our moans are heard.
Our wanton desire
takes over at times.
Our breath is bated
awaiting passion's crimes.
Barely undressed,
and you're taking me.
You enter with force
approaching blissfully.
Pounding bodies,
sex and sweat
forbidden ecstasy
since we've met.
We scream together
until we cum.
We just can't get enough.
Our senses are numb.
Still more to show me
it's utter bliss.
Your dessert from "Down Under",
an Australian Kiss.
Your eyes are shining.
Your mouth is full of flavor.
Lying back, per my request
as I return the favor.
Author notes
for you
A contest entry
- Give Me Your Best Adult 18+ by WillAlwaysLove.
625 points, ended January 3, 2008, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - finding love by Hecate616.
350 points, ended March 17, 2008, 143 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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ahh..
those special, lovely sexy moments. i want to relive them over an over again -
hey hey lady this was nice and juicy temptation
you cooked together here i think well i know this was worth some gold naira here congradulations
and it was a pleasure
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I really LOVE this stanza
Still more to show me
it's utter bliss.
Your dessert from "Down Under",
an Australian Kiss.
good job1 and best of luck
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I think I best not comment this It might be a woman trap 
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such a wise man..hehe..
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Do I sense an erotica writer in you? WOW sissy, this was hot! hmmm maybe we need to talk more...sounds like someone is on fire! lol Congrats on the Gold~ Trisha
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even us straightlaced prim and proper girls gotta let loose sometimes..hehe..just let me know if you have any questions...hehe..
hugs a bunch
blessed be,
r
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I love it. Your words are perfect and your rhyme is amazing. Thank you for entering and good luck.
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This is ....Hot!!
I would love to stay and
comment , but I need a cold
shower and a cigarette
lol
This is really stunning
My new fav from you!
Good luck in the contest,
tho' it looks like Gold to me!
~Pastel
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thanx Pastel..you support and your words of encouragement means so much to me..
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HOT....one Sissy!!! My...my...loved this a LOT!!! Best to you in the contest!
Love~
Suz
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thanx my sissy..learned how to do those HOT HOT HOT ones from you..lol..we got the naughty in us...hehe
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WEll done, I really liked it. To the point, your choice of words are great. Your rhyme and rythm are perfect. Great job. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck.
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wow
I love it!
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