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Tainted Immaculation

Be still the darkness in my heart.
With this kiss may the ascension start
Slip into shadow, fall from grace.
The demons rise, to take your place.
Immaculate countryside now laid to waste.
Littered with corpses who stain its face.
Why has God left this place?
Angels now begin to erase,
From the heavens above
And now deface,
The smoldering ashes of the stars,
Whose light has faded and become chaste.
Eden blooms under a nocturnal plight
Illuminated by shadows, the truest of nights.
Skeletal trees drift in the sway,
Macabre motions, on sinful display.
The erotic call of the night beast
Sings to my heart, my soul is released.
Palpitations in my chest
Remind the stalker, I am not dead.
My blood a choir, sings to his passion
Heart the drum, puts words into action
Take this flesh, take this corpse.
All skin and bones,
No remorse.
Intimate whispers spread over me,
The silence your answer,
I become one with the beast.

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behold what i have created and lo it chills my spine

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  • ruiven
    December 31, 2007

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    "My blood a choir, sings to his passion
    Heart the drum, puts words into action"

    this part really stuck out to me. heather your amazing you amazing goddess you. fantastic write.
    ~raven


  • ShadowSoul
    December 27, 2007

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    Awesome darling truly awesome, it seems you don't have as much imagery as usual, but still much more than i can come up with! And the rhyming sounds good well done xox