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[ Sorry - Stranger ]

Gomen nasai, Gomen nasai
I'm sorry, I'm sorry

Watashi ga shitte itara
If I had known

Koreha kesshite hajima ranakarou
This never would have begun

Gomen nasai, Gomen nasai
I'm sorry, I'm sorry

Watashi wo kudasai nasai
Please forgive me

Utsukushi i tanin niyotteha, soe watash ga miryou shita
Beautiful stranger, that has captivated me

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  • micol
    December 29, 2007
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    This makes me with I could hear it spoken, in both languages. There is an enviable simplicity (NOT simple-mindedness) in both message and poetry. The last line is particularly powerful, shifting the piece from a traditional poem about lost love to something much more intriguing, dramatic, powerful. Well done.