Hold my hand and I will feel
That little jump in my heart-
That baby firework that smiles
As you hold my hand.
If you smile at me I
Will feel that tingle in my eye-
Just begging for me to cry
In happiness as you smile.
Maybe if you give me a kiss
On the cheek I will
Feel that glow
And I will shine-
My beautiful light
Penetrating through all
Sadness-
ts
e r
a
turning into
Twinkling stars-
So just let me say-
Don't Cry!
A contest entry
- Happy Poems of all sorts by kids to age 13 by Periwinkle Blue.
550 points, ended January 4, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - What Ever You Want!! by GypsyEyes.
700 points, ended January 21, 2008, 44 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please critique- I can take truthful comments...
Comments
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this so sweet! i think that the tears should be spaced out like this though t
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but that's just my opinion! thank you for entering my contest! good luck!
~NineTailedFox
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Oh, sweetly done! I am happy to get such an affectionate poem. Thank you for giving me a smile!
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Lol friendly poem :)
By the title Tears,i thought it would be a sad poem.but NO that was a happy pretty poem about . it was a happy love poem! good luck in the contest....Bad News: i have some compititon! lol!!!! but really i do.... Seiriously BIG stuff here im DONE! continue with your talent! its great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! P.S bye
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