Buried
in circles of insanities light,
wanting yet a cool oasis to rest.
Author notes
A piece of a write like you asked...
A contest entry
- One Amazing Stanza by Cherokee.
450 points, ended December 31, 2007, 14 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Nice! Makes me want to read the rest...
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I have to say that I totally love your border! Did you make it yourself? Lovely stanza as well.
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Very lovely sis...a wonderful strat of end of a write...words well placed with room to grow...well done.
Best to you!
sis
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nice
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really good mommy
i love you
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this is an amazing stanza and its powerfully written. really capturing and makes the reader want more. well done and best of luck
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