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Burning Melodies

Let me feel your heat,
sliding with skill;
and taste your confessions,
pulsing of desire.

Fingertips ablaze,
singing trails upon flesh
in scorched temptations.

White-hot lava
sizzling with every touch;
an eruption in the making.

Glazen eyes hold secrets.
Do you dare find hidden messages
locked within this soul?
Subtle caresses speak louder
than any whispered words;
and I am sure you know.

Fiery lips nip gently;
dancing across your mouth
until a world surrounding
vanishes, and it is only you and I.

Time does not exist,
just you, me
and sweet harmony.
Played out like a tune
upon a fine cello;
listen closely for the crescendo.
Breathless with each note,
every thundering beat;
until at last,
I fall completely into you.

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Don;t wake me from this dream unless it's my reality.

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  • Airborne Ed silver member
    December 27, 2007

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    This is a true pleasure to behold. To read such sensuous writtings that paint such pictures within ones mind. I asure you they are nothing short of a true masterpiece and they are inspired by your poem. You really do write with such beauty. Thank you so much for sharing this with everyone in AP....

  • Heavenly Angel
    December 27, 2007

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    Sooo very wonderfully sensual! Love this!
    Thank you for sharing, sweetie!
    This rocks!