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My question is....

When do the tears stop falling
  and the pain lessens?
When did all the time together
  mean nothing like a book not read?
When does the realization of a hopeless life
  make you forget there is still hope?
When, if ever, will you see the hidden truth,
  the one that says 'I love you'?

Please tell me what you think

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  • sgking123
    September 14

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    awesome

    u prtray impotent frustartion of a meaningless life so well.I loved this beautiful piece.Why dont you pen more dear.You can visit my portfolio .I have several poems that may be of real recognition for you.Thanks for sharing.