Come home to me, let me take your hand.
I wait here longing for you by my side.
Forever will I hold you in my heart.
Walk through that door, come home to me.
Let me take your hand, come share paradise.
Yearning to make sweet love by candle light.
For you are the keeper of my heart.
Open the gates to heaven, let me take your hand.
Come share paradise, open the gates of heaven.
Let me take your hand, you are the keeper of my heart.
Walk through that door, let’s make love by candle light.
I wait here, longing for you, come home to me.
Author notes
Thoughts and longing of the other woman.
A contest entry
- The opposite that i want - adult content by Mykeee.
900 points, ended January 10, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - What Ever You Want!! by GypsyEyes.
700 points, ended January 21, 2008, 44 entries
Honorable mention
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paradise
the youth and beauty in your write makes me long for the so far away paradise never to be achie ved again
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congrats on the HM! nice poem you have here! i enjoyed the imagery and the over all emotion of this write. good luck in my twins contest.
~ThatONEweirdChick -
This is certainly one of your most romantic emotional writes as it speaks to the heart and soul without confusion. Good luck in the contest and Happy New Year.
Ted E
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i liked the repeated take my hand lines! i thought this poem was very good and can totally relate and think other people can too! thank you for entering and have a happy new year!
~Dommi -
Very romantic
I can feel the longing for that special someone in this, wanting him to come home to you.
A lovely write
Good Luck ~sugar~
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Come home. Thats so inviting. Make what isn't is and knowing with open arms he will be welcomed. Very romantic. I like the repetition. It shows the desperation of the heart ~ Good luck ~ Michael
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Well am sure there are so many women/men in this pair of shoes. Longing for the someone special. Well written piece, and the read was heatfelt.....Ma/novy
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awww....
sis I can feel you on this one, what a marvelous and heartfelt piece, very intrigueing and reaps of true feelings here. Very lovely
Good luck, I'm sure you will do well in the contest.
Lady
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