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A Page Left Behind

While my life becomes an expanding book

The plot thickens and the characters change their looks

When all has been said and done, the ink well is dry--

I will leave a page uniquely penned, to remember me by!

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Note: original submission altered & drastically shortened-per your comment.

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  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    December 27, 2007
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    I think this is the goal we all have. Nice poem. ~Pamela


  • Cherokee
    December 27, 2007
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    This has some good stuff in it but it is really more of a poem than a tidbit. sorry.


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    December 27, 2007

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    Tell us more lol This is a n Excellent poem Dear Good luck in the contest and I hope you have a wonderful New Year


    • MassMan
      December 27, 2007
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      Thank You, Friend

      I was still letting the ink dry and finding an illustration, and you were already commenting on my limited edition!
      What a friend--one with kind words of encouragement! Thank you!
      David