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Millie the Frog

A frog was sitting on a giant lily
He had a big cock but felt very silly
Because no one wanted to suck his willy
And his real name was actually Millie.
     

I hope you have a lovely Christmas. As you open your presents, think of this song.

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  • LadyDementia gold member
    January 6, 2008
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    Very drool and dire...awesome good luck with it in the contest


  • Keith
    January 6, 2008
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    Both vacuous and obscene. I will look out for this frog. He (or she) should be easy to spot.


    • Zorro69
      January 6, 2008
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      I am horrified to learn I did not win a prize with this poem. Praise like "vacuous and obscene" set my pulses racing, faster than racing pulses on a racing pulses sort of day. Another contest holder actually REMOVED it from her contest. Can you BELIEVE that?


  • Naridill gold member
    December 30, 2007
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    Not sure of the complete metaphor but your words definately cum across nicely.

    Thanks for entering
    Much luck

  • maccladd
    December 30, 2007
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    why was he called millie if he is a he? I have a cousin called millie its a she


    • Zorro69
      December 30, 2007
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      He was a trannie who liked it up the arse.

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