Once upon a time
In a land far far away
There lived an old shepherd man
And he was looking for a harp,
But not just a harp,
A magical harp.
A lot of people were helping him find it,
But he met an old, old
Alley cat
And the alley cat told him
Were the magical harp was,
It was far in a cave were
A dragon lived-
Five thousand dragons lived!
And so the old shepherd man said thank you
And walked north to the harp.
But he forget his sword
But then he remembered he had buried it
Somewhere around were he was walking!
And then he found it.
He put it in his sheath and continued his journey.
He found the cave were the dragon live.
And the dragon came out of the cave,
It looked all red and gold,
They all looked red and gold.
He took out his sword and he sliced off one of the dragons head.
He threw his machete and sliced all the dragons in half.
Then he carefully walked through the cave.
And he found the magical harp
It had fancy parts on it
It was very fancy,
Very dusty and old.
And then he took, the harp home.
And then he played
It sounded so beautiful he fell asleep.
THE END
Author notes
My sissi typed this. I am six years old and I thought of the entire poem, my sissi didn't help me exept for typing. I hope you like it!
A contest entry
- ~ Poems about Animals~ Contest for kids up to age 13 by PinkPony.
450 points, ended January 5, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Is it good for a six year old?
Comments
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Very good for your age, I wish you all the luck and good wishes to continue your writing skills, this was really nice to read, Lovely, lovely story.
Love and hugs,
Lencio
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hold on,
what? wasn't the guy a shepard?!?!?!?!? -
This is amazing for a six year old! You are so creative. Excellent job! Wow, I wish I could write this well when I was your age! Good luck!
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Excellent!
And you're only six!This is very very very good!Marvellous!I liked the way you described the dragons.Keep writing fantastic poems like this and you'll become a poet!Good luck in the contest!
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Wow Jasper!!!
This is one of your better poems little bro. It isn't as 'little-boyish' as the other ones... There is a lot of creativity in this poem. I had fun typing it!
Love
Your sissi Vivien
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It's very nice you such a wonderful sister to help you type this masterpiece; you are very talented.
Harps are such beautiful instruments and this poem brought a smile to my face and a springing harp tune in my head, thank you for sharing, you're way ahead of the class.
~Mairéad~
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I DO like this poem very much...
AND I do believe you wrote it all and that your sister typed it for you. The reason I believe it is that kids your age write really terrific stuff, and this poem is terrific.
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