How love lifts, warms and withers
the ice I feel melting,
a tide receding to new horizons,
a chance to dance away the pain
surrounding fragile hope;
A contest entry
- One Amazing Stanza by Cherokee.
450 points, ended December 31, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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The flow in this stanza is great! I love how the imagry warms the reader into reading it yet again! This is the first that I have read of yours and look forward to reading more!
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A fragment, perhaps, but somehow it feels complete--a beautifully-worded piece.
Bill
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What amazes me about this is that I know exactly what you are talking about. I have even tried to write about the feeling myself. I've never quite gotten it right though. You did great.
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Beautiful words of love...well done for a stanza in a write...lovely and soft flow...
Best to you!
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I like this stanza. Very nice indeed.
~Pamela 
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nice... kind of a mini poem rather than a fragment but nice.
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