The blackness that weighs down on me
Has turned the moon to red
All my tears have fallen here
On unstained pillows and
Unmarked silence alone in bed
I call out and no ones there
I call out
I cry out
I fade out
Fading to the empty sea
Fading to the memories
Fading to the when I was free
From you
I feel you tearing me and pulling me
Painting me on your wall
The grays and black of your soul
Have me plastered and undefined
Bleeding into your mind
Into your nightmare
adding some color to your oblivious world
I call out
I cry out
I fade out
Fading to the empty sea
Fading to the memories
Fading to the when I was free
From you
It wont work now
Your fake affections
Your cold caresses
I am more than that
More than you
More than lying
More than venom
More than repulsion
I am solitude
sweet and affectionate
Trying to get rid of
This zombie you have turned me into
For one last time
I call out
I cry out
I fade out
Fading to the empty sea
Fading to the memories
Fading to the when I was free
From you
From you
Unknowing
Heartless
Choking
You!
A contest entry
- Give me some dark, cryptic lyrics.. Or make me wonder what the hell you are talking about! by Silversunshine.
600 points, ended January 12, 2008, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I give it 6 out of 5 stars! =3
Great emotions in this poem, nothing less from Zigg-Dono, well deserved winner =3 -
Wow!
I absolutely love the build up from the beginging to the end in these lyrics! Your chorus is great & the whole thing flows very nicely. Great rock lyrics, my friend!
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I really like this. It was just perfect.
Deffinitley should be the winner of gold in this contest.
Good luck. =] You deserve it. -
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Thanyou so much^_^
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