Clouds are coming,
here come the rain
dark, like a
Halloween night.
No moon, no light
just the sound
of the pouring rain
and the clashing of thunder,
beyond in the distance.
We all know why
the storms have come.
Another love has gone cold.
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idk wat was goin through my mind but it just came to me....also i was thinkin about that song by Garth Brooks
please tell me wat u think
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it sounds ominous
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Deep!!!!!!!
This is deep and intense as well. A different way of looking at storms but hey, it makes sense to me. I liked this alot!!!! Thanks for sharing this with me tonight!!! Hapy New Year!!!~~Toni~~
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thank you for your lovely comment
happy new year to you too
Stevie
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very nice, I love the rain. thank you for sharing this and you are right someplace, somewheres another love has grown cold.keep penning.
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I especially like the last stanza where you
found an explanation for the storm:
"We all know why
the storms have come.
Another love has gone cold. "
No biggie,jus another love gone cold.
Good job.
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thank you very much for you comment....its been raining outside and i just wanted to write wat i saw =D but thank you for you nice comment
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Yeah, I think that all of us can relate to the storms of life. I love garth brooks...he is one of my all time favorite singers. Great person to be inspired by
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he is a wonderful man i love his songs they always make good sense to me...but thank you for your comment =D
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i love how you put the words together, each line bringing a different image to my head.
You seemed to sum it all up with the last line, and you left a little bit in my head to think about.
Very nice write
great job
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thank you very much for you comment....
it has been raining and i just wrote wat i saw.....but thank you for your nice comment =D
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