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sick of censorship

and im so sick
of hiding
the ashes in my windowsill

the rice paper evidence
i flushed away.

im so done
with keeping
the words behind my face
behind my skin

its not my way

im so lost
in someone elses
overlooked
hypocrisy
can you see

im so
tired
of being told
my words are
inappropriate

dont tell me
what to do
or what to say.
cuz i wont listen
its not my way.

and im so sick
of drowning
the smell of smoke in your perfume

the scented tissue evidence
i threw away.

im so tired
of staining
my words with emptiness
with censorship

youre in my way

im so lost
in someone elses
underminding
tyranny
cant you see

im so
tired
of being told
my words are
inappropriate

dont tell me
what to do
or what to say.
cuz i wont change for you
its not my way

im so
tired
of being told
my words are
inappropriate

i wont change for you
i wont change for you
i wont change for you
i wont change for you

and im so sick
of hiding
the ashes in my windowsill
the smoke in your perfume...

Author notes

[[Burning the Book]]
PW
not crazy about this one myself

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Comments


  • DrunkenRam
    January 7, 2008

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    Why not like this one, I do, I like the rebel spirit it envokes, if you live up to it You will be a happier person.
    I like it.


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    January 5, 2008

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    Very nice write, best of luck in the contest.


    whisper


  • Cinder
    January 5, 2008

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    I liked this. It held subtle emotion and if you're not to crazy about it. You're more then welcome to enter a different one!

    But I liked this.