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Through An Iris

A blanket of countless hues
a tapestry painted
from the skies
each sweet in spring's blossom and
each vibrantly beautiful in
summer's care.

They branch out across
the grassy slopes
their hallowed stems opening
to greet my soul
and like angels frolic across the meadow
to wrap me in their
caring embrace.

And as their petals share
an ardent dance with
the shifting winds
and the river's songs
I look upon these irises
with enraptured awe
and wonder
how my heart lets
these wondrous joys
be lost
through the
burdens of life.

When life's true happiness
is not in one's
glorious feats and
accomplished dreams
but from the simplest whisper
from an angel's voice
through an
Iris' melody.

Author notes

To my lovely and caring friend, who was always there for me, and reminded me of what living truly is. ^^ Thank you.

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  • Random Goldfish gold member
    December 27, 2007

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    I LOVE your imagery and you have an excellent word choice.

    Síochán leat
    ~Mairéad~


  • ktothecarro
    December 27, 2007
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    very well written, thank you for your beautiful and impeccable word choice.


  • Sonja
    December 27, 2007

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    It is nice to see your poetry again. This one is so nice written much different than your previous rhyming poetry but not less meaningful. Nice tribute to your friend.
    ~Sonja~


    • R.R. Lim
      December 27, 2007
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      :)

      Haha...thanks my friend. Yes, it is quite different no? It's been over a few months since I've picked up the pen and started writing. These few months have been an emotional roller coaster ride for me, I'm glad the holidays have given me time to think....

      Thanks Sonja!

  • iristephanie
    December 27, 2007
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    :D

    wow thanks!! haha


  • butterflywriter silver member
    December 27, 2007
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    through an Iris melody....

    great imagery

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