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Power

Sitting at the humming, silver box,
With the world's secrets at our fingertips.

The surface - slander, mere conceit and bravado,
But looking deeper reveals truth - insecurity.

We hold the power.

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Prompt: Information Is Ammuntion

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  • Grey Mouser
    December 29, 2007

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    With the power of all this vast knowledge at our fingertips, it amazes that it is used to hide the truth of who we are more than it is used to create. Nicely done take on the prompt, thanks for entering into the contest.
    Be well and be blessed,
    Mouser


  • DrunkenRam
    December 27, 2007

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    Keen insight for such a youngster, to be able to see through Facades is key to understanding the human condition.
    Very nicely written as well.


    • Gigglegasm gold member
      December 27, 2007
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      Unfortunately, not a skill I possess, I have been and still am fooled by many a facade.
      A skill I need to hone. Badly!

      Thanks for your comment!


  • BellaD
    December 27, 2007
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    Nicely done!

    Your words are powerful. I am wondering, though, what the humming silver box is...a computer?


  • LadyDementia gold member
    December 27, 2007
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    Wonderful poem, good luck in the contest

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