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Lotus Love

A fountain of dreams
Was carried on soft sighs
On the first summer
That never ended.

Flower of fire--
This pirouetting light
Is my Lotus love.

27 Dec, 2007

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  • Knocklegoggin
    January 31
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    fragile, i can almost taste the petals a beautiful return,


  • Room without doors silver member
    January 10

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    Outstanding

    I love the lyrical quality of your poetry and admired your metaphor in the second stanza- very poetic. You are very creative with language and this poem has great flow, well-written with a feeling of intensity.


    • manoguru
      February 6
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      hey thanks for the comment on my lotus love... sorry for the late reply, but i was away from AP for quite a long time. thanks again