I am alone with all my pride
Waiting for you by my side
Lonely meadow remains cloudy
Sadness often does speak.
I long for your smile, I long for your frown
“Love” is a word that keeps me strong
Suddenly I close my eyes
To open the trap door of another world
Where we are holding each- other tight
Feeling each other's breath in us.
Silence does break in fragmented tales
Loneliness often fills with joy
We are heading towards our journey
Sealed promises are kept in safe.
Lets have a journey towards eternity
Let my love to speak.
Let this emotion to be flourished
With the rhythm of your heart.
A contest entry
- Picture prompt, What do you think? by stavykm.
950 points, ended December 28, 2007, 9 entries
Honorable mention
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Thanks a lot for your inspirational Comment.
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G'Day Romily
Your final stanza is utterly beautiful and speaks deeply to the heart.
Great write from beginning to end.
Congratulations on the Honorable Mention you have won
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Thank you for your entry
Best of luck
Stay safe
~Manda
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Thanks
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Thanks for entering my contest and best of luck!
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great emotion abe
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Thank you for the comment.
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Sadness to Joy
A nice write on picture. Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Kelle Marie
stavykm
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Thank you dada for your lovely comment.
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Thank you sir for your comment.
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Such is the power of love. We dream, fantasize and do all sorts of things. Thoughts float dear sister, with joy, sadness, ofcourse all opposites changing with rapidity.A remarkable outcome of your feelings..nice to keep it and show it to your sweet heart one day.
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Very Good
This is a good love poem.
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