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Why? I cried while writing this. IM me forfull story

Sitting on my own
Once again
Waiting in the cold
For my so called friends

Why should I have been hurt
But still get the blame
Lose another friend
It's always the same

Tears roll from my eyes
Cause they never came
Heart ripped in two
I'll never trust again

Why should I say sorry
Cause you broke my heart
Why should i say sorry for calling you a di ck
Cause thats what you are

Why should I have been hurt
But still get the blame
Lose another friend
It's always the same

And i don't know how it happened
And I don't know why
How can someone so wonderful
Make me choke and die

Why should I have been hurt
But still get the blame
Lose another friend
It's always the same

Now they are angry
Because tears are rolling down my face
They slap me and yell
Tell me to come back from space

Why should I have been hurt
But still get the blame
Lose another friend
It's always the same

Please dont use big words, i'm not as smart as i'd like to be.

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  • Yellow-Rose
    December 28, 2007

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    While reading this I can feel how hurt you are. Maybe this happened so that you can realise that there is more out there for you than these so-called friends. If we find the lesson in all the obstacles that come our way and then make positive changes in our life, it was worth happening. Try seeing it this way for one day.... Miracles happen if you beleive. Take Care, Cathy. P.s. Very well written poem, sounds like a song


  • Nstlgc4Disaster
    December 28, 2007
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    this is great
    the rhyming just flows so well
    it really tells a story as well
    very good!


  • jcat gold member
    December 27, 2007
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    Well as the old saying goes "With friends like these who needs enemies?" You really need to get friends who completely understand the meaning of the word FRIEND!!! Because these people just don't get it.. I say let these losers go and make new ones that will stick by you!!!


  • musik-freek
    December 27, 2007

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    Aww, lauren why did you tell me when you called? and if you needed to talk i couldve called you instantly. I am so over the trying to compete with you thing and i just want to be a really supportive good friend to you. Please tell me these things. I could tell you were sad on the fone when you are sad i am sad. I really liked the poem, like LIKE like maybe you should think of making it into a song! hey call me again when you get this i want to talk to you about something that will really cheer you up. love you always lauren!
    Katie


  • QueenOftheJunglegym
    December 27, 2007
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    ok. i was going to meet a some mates (including a guy i really liked) and waited in the middle of the shopping mall for 30 minutes. They never came. The next day they yelled at me to get over it saying they did which is unfair coz i was the one who got dissed and hurt yet they still blamed me.
    im down a few friends now which is worse because sure they were crap but they were just about the only ones i have

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