The heart,
A wonderful piece,
Cut out of glass,
Has a sparkling beauty.
My heart,
It's been broken,
ever since the first time,
that you droppped it.
I tried to make something,
Tried to put it back together,
Yet there were parts,
That were nowhere to be found.
It was scarred,
Yet I could live with it,
But then someone else dropped it,
And had to put the pieces back together.
More of it was lost,
And gaps started to appear,
You said that you would repair it,
Yet you only made the holes bigger.
I dropped my own heart,
In order to keep yours safe,
I thought you would appreciate it,
But you only took advantage of it.
Only few parts of my heart are left,
I'm not letting you break it,
I've had enough of the pain,
Your words and actions have caused me.
I stopped loving you,
But not as if you care,
Go on without me and let me be,
Don't ever break my heart again.
A contest entry
- A Dark/Emotional Contest by Simply Lost.
450 points, ended January 2, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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nice describes everything so well
keep it up.
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Now, this is very good! But...you haven't told me which option it is for! please send a message telling me, or add it to the author notes
As for the poem, I love the imagery, and the structure, it really does work!
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