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Immitation

I am the last breath you take before you close your eyes
I am the warm hands embracing your coolness, your stutter
I am neither here, nor there,
I live, a calm, a resigned life of wonder
I am everything you've never wanted
In front of you, I am.
I am.
I am the quintessential thought,
The cornerstone of all your dreams.
Dreams in shambles,
I am.
I am the pinnacle of your success,
the raptures of your downfall, the complacency of your limbs
I am too much, but I'll never
Never,
Be enough
I am complete in thought,
Desirous in action, in mood
I am the beast under your bed, the last star in your sky
The ticking of your clock, heart, clock
The silence of your words
The absence of your mind
The back and forth and sideways,
Your future
Your past, your present
Your mindful indulgence of physical attraction and lust
And inquiries to your being are made formal by your disprove
I am your mind, your body, your whims your attractions
I am you.
I am you.
I am you.
You'll never, be me.

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  • kkblue42
    January 9, 2008

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    unbelieveable

    Ms. Lullaby, I love this poem, it reminds me of the one I love, and anything that reminds me of him is a wonderful thing. I can't believe how much this poem touches my heart....
    keep up the amazing work.

  • kkblue42
    January 9, 2008
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    unbelieveable

    Ms. Lullaby, I love this poem, it reminds me of the one I love, and anything that reminds me of him is a wonderful thing. I can't believe how much this poem touches my heart....
    keep up the amazing work.


  • wattle silver member
    December 27, 2007

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    Ms Lullaby, you don't write often, but you do write well. I hope he/she is all those things and more for you and that the bulb keeps on glowing. - magical --- thank you.