One day I’ll be walking in the rain
With my hope on a string
No one wants to hide under ceilings
And walls
And I guess it’s true
That you kind of have to
When no umbrellas seem to fall
And the fact you could be displaced by me
Surprised me most of all
The depth of the twist
I just can’t help but dismiss
On the equation of this
It’s quite awkward to find myself
At attendance
(But that was just nonsense)
Excuse me for the delay
Today, I stepped out of my body
I looked around for my soul
Searching tree tops and vast oceans
Still, my heart was still raw
And truth be told,
A little eroded
Dug under the ground
Deep into the Earth
Discovering nothing but roots,
Creatures and Dirt
I stood for a second to give it a thought
That perhaps my soul
Doesn’t want to be sought
How quaint the idea hit me
Just hours too slow
You’d think I’d hit the nail on the head
Longing for the monster under my bed
But I guess this is in between
Where the journey ends
With you, I came face to face
And inside you it ceased existence
Behind your back and below
How dare you…how could you?
Have stolen my soul?
And still,
You are relentless…
Author notes
It's a little odd. Thats okay! Chip chip! It's totally 2:20 AM!! Wooopp!! Today I went to the movies and saw National Treasure 2 (i know i'm a gay ball of poo) Actually it was pretty neat. It was a lot more exciting then it would usually be because I was wearing cookie monster pajama pants over my jeans. Me and my buddy faked some people out by mooning them. It was cool, they were expecting to see booty but they saw jeans! MWAHAHAHAH! Night. Humans are pretty much marsupials when they're pregnet. And neptune isn't covered with water. Two things I sort of discovered today...lol.
I hate my fan, it discovered my weakness of being cold :/
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oh i do love this one! she is right, it is an incredible idea to imagine, and certainly an intriguing twist of fate. i really like the idea and also the way you wrote it =D
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Thanks Capitoon!
I'm glad you love this one. Lol. Hahaha I thought it was kind of weird to imagine, if my soul just randomly shot out of my butt I'd be actually be pretty scared...
But since this is just a poem *Cough cough*...haha.
Thankyouuu for your lovliness lovely greensweatr.
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Dang I have fallen behind
Forgive me!
"And the fact you could be displaced by me
Surprised me most of all
The depth of the twist"
..that stood out to me most of all..I want to have someone displaced by me
It's just a seemingly wonderful feeling that could exist...love the idea of how someone has taken your soul and you seek it, only to find out that they have it and don't seem to willing to give it back..pfffft.
anyway...Fascinating write!
♥
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Mann overboard
Thats funny, cause I think I recall that being my most strongest part (the part I meant the most) Good job for finding it too! hahaha. Yeah well the whole stealing of the soul thing can get quite annoying, when you know they have it, they don't know they do, and even if they did whether or not they wanted it, and the fact that they would feel bad about it and try to give it back, and then you would be mad cause that isn't possible at all. So you barter and trade. You can have mine, I'll just take yours. Hahahahahahaha. Wow cool.
Yeah I feel the same way about that pffffffffffffffffffffffffft. lol.
Thankyou as always.
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Thou ist a writer of such admirable talent.
yet another poem which left the feeling of emptyness in my soul,
because i wished i had written it myself.
there is reason why you are in my favorites, i can see.
wonderful piece.
Blessed be
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weeelll
Thy Kali/Tweedle thanks thou Goblinweb. Lol.
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