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Fire In Her Eyes

looming around her
I dance on the air
suffer the moment
suffer her stare

lingering loneliness
separate glare
lamenting a lunacy
the fate in her hair

swallow the sky of silence
cut these wings away
just for this moment
to love I would betray

to caress her breasts

feel her swollen thighs

kiss the pride of her

to feel the fire in her eyes 

 

 

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  • Stickboy gold member
    January 6, 2008
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    Hot congrats on your new shiny Bro


  • Arizona Sunset
    January 6, 2008

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    wow...this was a hot take on the prompt! Happy to see a shiny here!!! loved it! Blessings always! ~Trisha~


  • WillAlwaysLove silver member
    December 27, 2007

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    Loved it! Your rhyme is spectacular. Your choice of words depict the picture. Great penn and super flow. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck.