I'm on the Earth
Outside my bedroom, dear
Look at the sun
And how it smiles so clear
A cloud comes by
And shakes upon the flowers
It's smiling by
As it gently showers
Here is ground
It holds between my toes
It's gentle grip
Pushes up as he grows
Just see chalk
And how it grins, it's shining
Upon that cloud
It finds the silver lining
[Who loves the sun...?]
And since you've gone
It never seemed as happy
[Who loves the clouds...?]
It dances oh, so sadly
[Who felt the ground...?]
Quite so sharply
I lost that cloud
With its.
Silver lining
[Who loves the sun...?]
Its ceased its shining
Since you've been gone
Author notes
Inspired by:
The Velvet Underground ~ Who loves the sun
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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hey christian
I don't know where have you been ...but i missed talking to you more than talking to anyone..anyway this is a beautifully written poem..wow...i'll find that song u were inspired by anyway hope to catch u online soon...i really don't know where have u been and where u r...all i know is that...ur poems are right here with me..close to my heart =)
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nice job mofie.
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