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[ monkeys are not the best, ]

monkeys are not the best,
they cheat lie and steal,
from the rest,
and less,
niceness,
is what they feel,

racoons are bandits,
thieves in the night,
they're loud when they fight,
its true alright,

lizards pretty much make no sound,
they just chase bugs around,
and around,
and around,

crash bandicoot is real,
he's an animal that talks,
like sonic the hedghog,
whose faster than a man sliding on a banana peel,

this poem is cool,
its really great,
you should read it during school,
you'll get an A

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  • pop123
    December 30, 2007
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    Great poem!Good luck in the contest!


  • Arizona Sunset
    December 27, 2007
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    This is a cute poem thank you for sharing ~blessings always~ Trisha


  • PinkPony
    December 27, 2007

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    Ah, a monkey poem...

    I am smiling and thinking that you must like monkeys... so I am giving you a monkey as a gift! If you are really older than 13, I shall give you two monkeys: Train them to be circus monkeys and have fun!


  • RachelSchuyler
    December 26, 2007

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    wow. you filled that dood with hot joy.

    "faster than a man sliding on a banana peel"
    that part sounded really dirty! ahahahaha

  • Sunshine Princess
    December 26, 2007

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    this is an ok poem it has some stuff that does not make sense you are older then 13 did you read rules
    genna

  • awsome poetry man2
    December 26, 2007

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    this is so amazing and it filled me with hot joy so hot that i wanted to spontaneously combust

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