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Fall

the rush of reality
deafens sensitive ears,
the cold of strangers
numbing the sense of feeling,
and the stark blackness of the world
renders each of us blind.
we are blind, numb, and deaf,
going around in circles
bumping into one another
and not caring...
whether we trip
and fall
into
an
open
manhole.

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