You injected your needle,
and opened my chest.
Ate up my heart,
and threw up the rest.
A contest entry
- 25 Words Or Less - Prewrites Allowed!!! by xxRainbowDawnxx.
450 points, ended January 2, 2008, 52 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Beautiful Dirty Pretty Poetry by Carpe Noctem.
525 points, ended January 3, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ♥x♥ Submit Your Quotes ♥x♥ by xxRainbowDawnxx.
450 points, ended January 9, 2008, 39 entries
Silver trophy winner
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Comments
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It was Short... but absolutely amazing! ^-^ Very well written and flowed quite nicely as well. =] Awesome write.
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not feeling this or likeing it much, you also have && which makes a stutter, does not flow freely, I don't get the quote
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Short and sweet. I really liked this. It's going to be stuck in my head all day, thanks.
Like I said, nice write. Thanks for sharing.
-mandy -
WOW. Such raw emotion in such few lines. I'm captivated.
Thanks very much for entering, and best of luck!
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I'm sorry you had to go through these feelings... I know what it feels like to be hurt deeply and I wouldn't wish it on anyone... very expressive.
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Yowza!
Pretty niffy lines my friend.
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