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It wasn't me

what did I do to make it worse
what did I even do wrong
I didn't do the crime
It seems like I don't even belong

Why can't it be let go
why can't I be forgiven
I didn't even do it
But my friendship is forbidden

Is it me?
or do they think
that I would do it again
why don't they rethink

I'll just wait
and maybe I will see
do they understand?
that it wasn't me

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  • Xxlovers-for-lifexX
    April 22

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    AMAZING AGAIN

    i really love this poem..."Why can't it be let go
    why can't I be forgiven
    I didn't even do it
    But my friendship is forbidden"

    this is also my favoret stanza..keep writting u have a great talent for it


  • Faeryn
    February 17, 2008

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    Very well written! I really liked it.
    "Why can't it be let go
    why can't I be forgiven
    I didn't even do it
    But my friendship is forbidden"

    this is my faovrite stanza; exspecially the last line. Great Job
    -Tay