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Sexy little secret

I watch the candle wax burn away todays flame

Listening to the stories of what you and I became

They say I am a tart, yet your title is now stud

My nails scratching hard, drawing everlasting blood 

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I sit and I recall, your exquisite demands

The soft lingering feeling, of the warmth from your hands

Placed upon my skin, touching everything you see

Biting and licking forbidden parts of me 

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You whisper in my ear as you take me from behind

Pulling on my hair, bodies heavily entwined

My shadow catches sight of the look upon your face

The force of your thighs, the headboard I embrace 

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The handcuffs on my wrists, bang against the wood

Singing beats of heaven, as only angels could

You slowly kiss my cheek, release me from your care

Our sexy little secret, kept from everyone out there! 

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  • Galaxy2
    January 11, 2008

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    Erotica... with the proper balance. I liked your restraint in the treatment of the theme. Your imagery is tangible. Mentioning the secret makes it attractive.
    An excellent read!

    Galaxy2


  • penman gold member
    December 31, 2007

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    Excellent

    Very erotic with such sensuous traces of thought woven in silky descriptions. Best of luck in the contest.


  • sidewinder silver member
    December 29, 2007

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    once agin touch on the erotic ...yet hold a heart within that romance held deeply within the heart and the soul!

    Keep penning on one stroke at a time!
    Bill


  • Celticmoon
    December 28, 2007

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    Laura I do believe you have found yourself once again You go girl! This is a well written piece to tantalize the senses and get the blood flowing. Sexy, sensual, seductive and simply hot. Bravo!


  • Michael A. de Melo
    December 28, 2007

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    You are truly gifted in the art of arousal. This piece speaks of taboo pleasures and leaves the reader desiring the taboo. It's sexy and provocative, yet at the same time it is tasteful.


  • honorable mention
    December 28, 2007
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    very hot here babe good luck in the contest


  • WillAlwaysLove silver member
    December 28, 2007

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    Love the handcuffs! Great poem, I liked it a lot. Your choice of words were wonderful and I loved your rhyme. Very sexy...yum! Thank you for entering my contest and good luck.


  • Blueskywonder
    December 28, 2007

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    A deeply sensual write with excellent imagery... seductive contentA great flow to this piece rolling of the tongue like warm honey. An excellent piece of sensual erotica expressed beautifully with sensation peaking in the last line
    This is excellent!


  • Silent Cougar Moderators member
    December 28, 2007

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    jeez,, now everybody knows,,,, j/k


    I like the way you did this, very cleverly written to entice the senses,, again...

    Thanks for putting this one in..a winner for sure.


  • sassylibra0074
    December 28, 2007
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    Love It

    Very sensual, good luck!


  • PerVirtuous
    December 27, 2007
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    I like it. Three bunnies.

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