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Parody

Fallen, those angels up high;
Cast down for wanting more.
They find redemption in your eyes,
Growing wings once more,
enfolded in your flesh.
They went through hell,
and found heaven on the other side.

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  • graylyxstorm
    January 2, 2008
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    you make such good visual imagery's.  good job


  • WillAlwaysLove silver member
    December 27, 2007

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    Short and to the point, I like it. Nice penn. Thank you for giving me the opportunity to read it and thank you for entering my contest and good luck.