let me go...
it hurts to stay here.
hold me tightly,
because you are my only hope.
I push and you pull,
different worlds,
they collide,
as if they were not meant to be mixed.
you say hold on,
you don't know yet.
I say tell me,
I need to know.
its as if Destiny's toying with you.
Its as if destiny's toying with me.
Its as if destiny's toying with us...
its messing with both of us and having fun with it.
The darkness pulls me in,
while the light pulls you out,
the two were never to have mixed,
this I see now.
no I’m not saying good bye to you,
I never could let go fully,
but I let go of the idea,
that we were meant to be.
The girlfriend on your arm now,
shows me where I stand finally.
and well forgive me for not noticing until now.
That is all I have to ask.
A contest entry
- Anything goes really by Blood13Rayne.
390 points, ended December 26, 2007, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Trapped....... by BeautifulCurse.
600 points, ended December 29, 2007, 33 entries
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I can relate.
I love your poetry.. I think anyone can relate to it like me. Keep up the good writing!
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I love the way you write
It's so honest and true to you
Another honest and wonderful peice of art.
Keep the ink flowing.
Fire
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Excellent Writing
Sad, but it is good to know the truth. Well written.
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this is cute.. but not puppy cute.. its very realtable and hard to deal with.. this is a great entry.. i like the idea of destiny toying with people.. great emotion and word choice... great write and good luck..
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The darkness pulls me in,
while the light pulls out,
Thats my favorite part of the poem. Its really good, as are all of your poems. I need to catch up on reading them!
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