OH little spider
with your abdomen so round
how you make me spin
with my feet no longer on the ground
My little spider
you are my one true love
forget that turtle
and forget that dove
I love how you spin
I love how you weave
inside and outside
of my mind of leaves
The way you eat
dose not bother me at all
oh how I wish
you were six to seven feet tall
come on my love
Digest my heart
it was there
only for you from the start
Author notes
can any one guess my faveorite animal???
Written November 4th, 2003
A contest entry
- Weird Love by poisonsilver.
500 points, ended November 8, 2003, 2 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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lol... that was awesome. I'm not the biggest fan of spiders myself... due to my little brother sticking them in my food when I was little. But I loved this poem... especially
"come on my love
Digest my heart
it was there
only for you from the start"
It's such a great ending! Awesome write.
~Christy -
Favorite animal...gee I'd guess spider..lol this was a nice read, normally I don't like spiders but the images you gave of weaving in and out was just neat...Good luck in the contest Sir!!
Until my end,
Crystal -
WOW! spiders rock! thiat is really really funny! great work!
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SPIDERNESS!!!!
GO SPIDERS!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved readind this poem. I love animals and spiders are definately an awesome creature.I also loved this poem....you write really well...I hope to read more from you soon....( I guess it's my turn to write again)
Edited on Nov 04, 8:39 p.m. because 'spelling mistakes'.
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