Looking back at a land once known
a feeling of sadness over-thrown.
A world that turned its back so quick
on a tangle of emotions wild and thick.
Making her who she is today
throwing obstacles her way
she hides behind sins and pain
looking for glory, seeking for fame.
She doesnt care who she'll hurt
she doesnt care who she'll kill or with who she'll flirt.
She just needs to be in control for once in her life
causing terror, worry, pain and strif.
Once she was beautiful,an angel of heaven
but she got lost in the world, at the age of seven.
She used to be amazing and bold
now all they see when they look is a story untold.
She's a temptress and she's every man's dream
she's no fool, but she's not what she seems.
She's looking back at a land she once knew,
it reminds her she trusts no one, and loves very few.
Author notes
I wanted to go past the obvious in the picture, and look for a deeper story
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Great job, I loved it. Your words were wonderful, great story. Not you, but it is an angel calling to her and I dont think people see that....will make my judging easier! LOL. Your rhyming was perfect and your flow was excellent. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck.
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