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beware (the devil comes in many guises)

Standing proud outside the gates garnered in finery the devil waits lusting demons, banished they scurry.

While in the distance an angels flurry calls to acceptance and in the hurry, to negate the scene block it from the mind,
Eternal damnation shall see him blind.

Should he fall from grace and yield to vice then alone will drown in melted ice from the heat of passion, of self awareness !
but more than likely from satans furnace.

Beware the devil comes in many guises.

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  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    December 26, 2007
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    The devil comes in many guises...ahhh, so do angels!!! Intense write, best to you!

    Az


  • WillAlwaysLove silver member
    December 26, 2007

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    Very unique, impressive.I like the difference of which I normally get. I am into darkness so this poem speaks to me, thank you for sharing. Good luck in my contest and thank you for entering.