Once a beautiful man,
now rots beneath me.
Nothing but shadows and dust.
A sin in itself,
never should have been.
The past is my future,
stuck in agony.
Peace has passed,
demons now devour.
Destruction is my life.
Tears have dried,
too many have fallen.
Changing the past is my dream,
have him in my arms again,
You were my life,
now there's none.
I wait for my savior,
he is my guardian angel,
patiently I sit.
A contest entry
- anything goes, options, a prompt and a picture by my1lovewearsdiapers.
400 points, ended January 19, 2008, 27 entries
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this was interesting im not a big fan of this write though it was good i thank you for entering
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Awe... he is forever alive in your heart!
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I wait for my savior,
he is my guardian angel,
patiently I sit.
Ah..what a truth is penned in such a wonderful verse..well done...
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this was deep and soulful. there was great rythm in this and had power in each line. a horrible feeling, the last line to me was gripping. great work.
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the flow is really good
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great write, love the visuals I get when I read this.
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wow
love it..you have totally captured the art of getting the reader's attention...love how you progressed this write..and the ending..he is my guardian angel,patiently I sit....wonderful write..thanx for sharing and good luck in the contest..love you sis..
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