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The rainbow tempts the ruthless,
Climbing ever higher.
The cloudless, blue sky - the limit.

The higher the climber,
The more callous the fall.
The muddy ground - rock bottom.

Author notes

Being from Ireland, the rainbow has an Irish connection.
There are legends (folklore) about leprechauns who store money near rainbows. If you reach the bottom of the rainbow (which is impossible), you get a pot of gold.
Also we have the Euro in Ireland and it's lots of pretty colours - blue, green, yellow, purple.
And thus, my rainbow metaphor was born!

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  • sheltered
    December 27, 2007
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    Great job.

    You know what they say about rainbows being the root of all evil... They should be banned!


    • Gigglegasm gold member
      December 27, 2007
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      I agree completely! And in order to get rid of them, rain should be banned in Ireland!


  • crimsondew
    December 26, 2007
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    A tempt alright...We just have to take care not to be too blind...Great write..All the best!


  • DrunkenRam
    December 26, 2007

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    Gives me an image of climbing the colorful arc.
    Difficult at the sides ( The Beginning ) but easier as one nears the top, Metaphorically speaking.


    • Gigglegasm gold member
      December 26, 2007
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      And those fecking leprechauns aren't much help either


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    December 26, 2007
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    Excellent take of the prompt it is wonderful Good luck

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