In your eyes,
I see love and passion.
I keep staring,
And wanting to never stop.
I love you so much,
And I can tell by your eyes
You love me too.
All at once,
The light goes out.
There is no longer love.
No longer passion.
Somehow you stopped loving me.
But somehow I still love you.
I have to hang on to hope.
Hope that you still love me.
And hope that I still see it in your eye.
I can't seem to stop.
I love you more than anything,
But the question is do you?
Lately there's been a spark.
And lately I've been thinking more and more.
Lately I've missed you
And wished you still loved me.
I've been tempted to call you
And tell you I love you.
But looking in your eyes is enough.
There is a spark.
I knew there was,
And I have to hold on to the hope
That you still love me
With all your heart,
The way I still love you.
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Koko
This is the Title option #6 - in your eyes
A contest entry
- What Ever You Want!! by GypsyEyes.
700 points, ended January 21, 2008, 43 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Enter All Your Love Writes Here! by xxRainbowDawnxx.
300 points, ended March 8, 2008, 306 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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i get the part about the light going out like really one momemnt they say i love you and the next its over
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This is a beautiful love, never let it go. I wish that the first time I fell in love was truly as beautiful as this, or at least to start off this way. It's precious.
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i liked the flow of this one...you have a lot of emotion in it...i've been in this situation before...thank you for entering my contest and good luck!
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I hope he will come around
Amazing write, Loved the structure.
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I like your writing. It's always so different from most of the stuff on this site. It's also always so good. Great job. Keep writing.
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