Six walls around you
They seem to feel tight
Dying to see
The sweet moonlight
Shining off the skin
While your still caged in
The glistening glow
Makes the happiness flow
Day by day
You patiently wait
To know if you will be in heaven
Or that place so far below
The warden now comes
To escort you in
This is now the place
Where your eternal ecstasy begins
A contest entry
- Dude this isnt where i parked my car... by I Sing His Lullaby.
330 points, ended January 7, 2008, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
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Comments
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Had to read this one a couple of times to understand it (I'm slow, I know). It's very different and that's what I like about it. Also enjoyed the word choice, especially towards the end.
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this piece is nicely written, it paints a nice scenery, however dark it may be your language is strong and raw here and I liked it a lot thanks for entering
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ZOMG i like it.
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