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Icecream

Icecream makes me happy
with chocolate sauce
and peanuts
m&m's and whip cream
oreos and chocolate chips
would be my wish
in a bowl all mixed up
grab a spoon i will share with you

A contest entry

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  • Scyphon
    November 29, 2008

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    You made me want candy and sweets... and Ice Cream But I don't have any
    Congrats on the bronze


  • Hope Angel silver member
    January 7, 2008

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    ooo... that sounds yummy! Congrats on the trophy and keep writing!


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    December 31, 2007

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    Oh yeah! All of these delicious treats
    sure would make me happy too! lol
    Great work putting this one together
    my friend. Good luck to you with it
    and keep up the wonderful work here!




    Jeremy0826


  • Periwinkle Blue
    December 29, 2007

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    Hooray for ice cream... I go for that, yes indeed! A wonderful poem that makes me glad you came.

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    December 28, 2007

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    Oh yes Icecream makes me very happy grabs a spoon and joins you Thank you for sharing goodluck in the contest much love


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    December 27, 2007

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    awww this is a gorgous write sweetie ilove ice cream too my favs cookie dough icecream.hehe well done and best of luck


  • crimsondew
    December 26, 2007

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    Wonderful

    Yummy! I WANT SOME TOO..I AM COMING...JUST SEARCHING FOR A BIG SPOON...

    All the best dear....Much


  • CherryOnTop
    December 26, 2007

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    Icecream makes me happy to. I got a spoon. this is a good happy poem.


  • Melodies
    December 26, 2007

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    I will be happy to join you!

    We like the same things! Ice cream is my favorite food. Is ice cream in the food groups? YES! It MUST be a food because I only eat food. Your poem gave me a big smile. >>>>>

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